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Ich umarme dich in meinem Traum
Ich umarme dich in meinem Traum by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

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Ich umarme dich in meinem Traum
Ich reiche dir die Hand
doch sie greift ins Leere
Ich umhülle dich mit meiner Liebe
doch du zerreißt den Mantel
Ich flüstere dir zu
doch meine Worte
verhallen im Nichts
Ich umarme dich in meinem Traum
den ich behalte
wenn ich erwache

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