@raycyden
Nina McIver

ray's ball of yarn
ray's ball of yarn by @raycyden (Nina McIver)

i finally decided on a background, i don't normaly do backgrounds. i hope the background dosen't take over the pic to much. i tryed to make it a bit light so that you focus on her and not behind her. please tell me what you think.

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Posted: Sunday, 20 November, 2005 @ 10:49 PM

hahahah this is a cute picture!!! I love her body curves!!!! Such a nice figure XD

The background is nice and soft, it defintely doesn't steal the focus. I'm thinking mainly because you didn't coour the background much, so the attention stays at the fully coloured character.

You can also try if you like, to colour it all in, but very lightly, so it actually looks like a true background and then colour her even more so instead of having light colours, you can have more solid colours overall? - It brings a different 'texture' to the overall picture =D

But overall I like exactly how it is now! XD Very lovely picture! runs to find a ball of yarn

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