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Rachel Swyear

Stranger in the Night
Stranger in the Night by @ray7228 (Rachel Swyear)

Another one of my spacescapes. I happen to like this very much. I think I could have lightened the outlining of the mantaray a bit more, but it turned out great overall.

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Posted: Saturday, 15 January, 2005 @ 05:11 PM

That is unbelievably beautiful. ;-;

Posted: Sunday, 31 July, 2005 @ 07:28 AM

Wow, that's fantastic. I love the glistening effects and the translucence of the manta-ray-like creature the most.

I don't think its necessary to tighten the manta ray as you said. The inconsistent outline adds to the glass-like effect. The only criticism that I would give here is that the picture's just alittle too blurry. I would like to see this with the creature as it is, but the planet just a little sharper to contrast the manta ray's ethereal appearance.

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