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Daisy Hunt

The Orichalcos strikes again...
The Orichalcos strikes again... by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)
This picture came out because of two reasons: I wanted to draw Duke with his hair out of the ponytail, and I wanted to see what he'd look like being controlled by the Orichalcos. o.o; In the complex RP I do, that's happened. I'll use the idea in a fic, too.
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Posted: Wednesday, 17 August, 2005 @ 12:34 AM

That certainly was a change of pace. nods I like how you tried to make his hair look more natural. X3

Athough, his face looks . . . I dunno, either too pointy or too long. I would say thin, but Duke's face was pretty thin to begin with. Though his smirk came out pretty well. Maybe though the die could've been a little more three dimensional. And I know Duke's pendant is practically impossible. Hmmm . . .

The arms look a lot better. You've gotten the upper body pretty much down, now you just need to work on legs. They often look a little . . . too straight, or like the person has really big hips. XD;; I think one way to maybe lessen this look is on the zipper front of the pants, make it look straighter and more in line with the rest of the leg, even though in reality it doesn't really do that . . .

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