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Internal Conflict

Brenin's Dream
Brenin's Dream by @Valesse (Internal Conflict)

Haunted by his axe-murdering past, Brenin the EMO vampire slips daily into the realm of dreams within his coffin. Inside of sleep nightmares of the past and premonisions of a horrible future dance in imaginative and disturbing ways that seem to always have their effects on even his awake mind.

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Teen (V)
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Finished Work
Submitted:
21y29d ago
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Posted: Monday, 03 November, 2003 @ 05:09 AM

this is nise inpertickler the deskripshon you should put it into the picher - making it stronger

Posted: Tuesday, 04 November, 2003 @ 11:35 PM

I agree that this picture could have more and the fact that I said that it was a finished work isn't really true to what I believe... It COULD be finished.. but it COULD very well be not-so finished...in fact that was scanned about 1/4 of a year ago and since then I have added some semi-part of a background but nothing else because I've been designing costumes like a mad ...costume designer...lately...so yeah.. But I definately agree. Thanks for the input!!! ^^^__^ <3

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