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kamori-chan sketch 2
kamori-chan sketch 2 by @Anime_Deity (Aline Spyer)

Yes! It's true! I changed it! smiles I followed everyones suggetions and hope to finish soon...of coarse, 'soon' depends on the amount of time I have.

The background on this one was really hard for me...I couldn't think of what to put (as you can see there are a ton of erase lines -_-)! but it seems to me that the artists block is dead! it died while I was going through my manga. Demon Diary v. 2 is what killed it. I suggest you read it. Maybe Kara's art will help you too.

Yes, I know, her neck is too long. She looks like a girraffe...but that can be easily fixed when I go to do the line art.

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Posted: Thursday, 13 May, 2004 @ 10:10 PM
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I'm a moron. I can't believe I never noticed you uploaded a more finished version. I'm sorry , please forgive me!

I really like where this image is heading. The details you've put into her outfit and the soft fold are really remarkable, and her profile looks much better! Her hand looks emtpy, now (much more well-drawn) I feel like she should be holding a staff or something.

I LOVE demon Diary! It's such an awesome manhwa! Kara's art is really beautiful. I'm glad to see it inspires you, and even though I'm so lax on commenting lately, I really am looking forward to seeing this picture finished!

Posted: Saturday, 15 May, 2004 @ 05:13 PM
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laughs No need to be sorry! I'm just glad you commented -- I kinda forgot about this image...(that I need to go finish...)

I really think I need to put her arm back on the ground, however. I think she might fall over.

I'm glad there's another DD fan out there! I would do anything to be able to draw like Kara...dies When in doubt, consult Kara's artwork (or CLAMP's) artwork. One of my reference rules. If nothing works...

google it.

teehee...happy to see someone will be happy to see the finished product...'cause I know I'll go through hell with those curtins...heheh....

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