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Speared
Speared by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

OW. Yami Bakura at the moment when the White Death thrusts the Eon Spear into him.

I love how the pose and expression came out; it was one of those awesome times where what I saw in my head was exactly what came out on the paper. Proportions are good, I hope, though I wonder if I may need to adjust the scale I was working with.... tried to slim the torso and legs down so everything would look like it fit, but isn't sure she got it all the way it should be.

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Posted: Thursday, 03 December, 2009 @ 11:28 PM

Oh wow. I love how it came out! Especially the expression.... He looks so shocked, and in so much agony! ;_;

Hmmm.... I think the proportions look pretty good too, though I think maybe the legs should be a bit thicker. But other than that, I think it looks great! ^^

Posted: Friday, 04 December, 2009 @ 02:41 AM

Thanks! I loved drawing his expression. ;_;

Yami Bakura seems to have pretty thin legs, but then again, so does everyone on the show. LOL. I was wondering if I got the scale incorrect and the body should be a bit smaller to go with the head. o.o The legs had been thicker before that.... but can alter things before inking and coloring.

One addition I'm planning to make is a small closeup panel in the upper lefthand corner showing a slightly different expression that I'd also wanted to depict. o.o I figured there'd be no sense drawing a completely different picture, as the expression would be pretty much the only thing different. So it'll be like a page of a manga, with a closeup panel and then the long shot showing why he looks so pained. ;_;

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