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Fallen Angel

Innocence
Innocence by @Hack_Beta (Fallen Angel)

Tears and blood streaming down my face, All of my hope is gone without a trace. Looking out the window at the pale sky above, All I’d asked for in my life was a little love. When I was a child, life was so simple and great, The innocence is gone now, and my life is full of hate. Now I look at life and notice things amiss, As I hold my head back and try to take this. I’ll never be the man I’ve ever wanted to be, Forced to remember the cold things you’ve said to me. “You’re worth more to me dead then alive,” This is the crap I don’t need to survive. God, would it kill you to love me a little? How the hell did I end up stuck in the middle? I’m gonna leave this place without saying goodbye, Secretly I know that you’re hoping that I die. You’ve taught me that I was always to blame, Enough times to slowly drive me insane. So I wish to return to the innocence I once had, And live lies of ignorant bliss with my mom and dad.

Someone learned to draw. Oh, no!!

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Fallen Angel

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