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Fallen Angel

I Stand Alone
I Stand Alone by @Hack_Beta (Fallen Angel)

As I roam these halls without a purpose in mind, Walking if there weren’t different points in time. Thinking that my stay in hell is almost done, But then I look and realize that it’s just begun. Students and teachers alike criticize me, Taking away all I’ve ever wanted to be. I sit in the corner to think about things, As I fight the bitter cold in the shelter of my wings. Dodging the bark of a million tongues, I can sadly say I’ve heard all those songs sung. I use to think that I had been forsaken, But now I know that I was incredibly mistaken. I always thought that I was gonna break, But now I know the steps I need to take. It started slipping away like grains of sand, I take my life and hold it in my hands. I take in account all my force and will, I’ve been pushed to the limit, I’ve had my fill. Even if the outcome is hard to say, The war would be over and done that day. The only fact that is clearly known, Is to get through this life, I must stand alone.

I was mortally outraged when i found out TODAY that on the 11th there was a bomb threat at my school, and they didn't tell us!!! BASTARDS!!! That's why I made Fallen smoking in a school.

Oh, yeah. I know a lot of people can relate to this poem, so please comment.

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Fallen Angel

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