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Kim Sova

Sariel
Sariel by @Teiris (Kim Sova)

This is the finished version of my friend's character Sariel. Oh I made a mistake last time..she's not a vamp, she's a fallen angel. Spiffy ne? ^^ My first REAL cg...I'm sho proud!! squeal Hope you like it darling! Artwork © Copyright 2003 Kim Sova

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Posted: Wednesday, 01 January, 2003 @ 09:23 PM

Hiya. You've commented a few times on my gallery, so I thought I'd check out yours, since you gave it to me and all. anyways. This is a cool picture, the bg is a nice touch. I have a bit of a critque to give though, hope you don't mind. I like her hair, very flowing and sutff. =D The legs look kinda funky. The thigh is very thick and the knees are too pointed. Also the chest area w/ her breast is a little too hight up (and again, a bit too pointed). Her arms are good, but her hands are too big for her body, but they're well put w/ the angles they are at. Good job on the eyes, but I think her right eye (the one on the outside) I don't think you'd be able to see that much of the white, it's kinda poking out more than it should, the nose should hide it more. The rips in her dress are very well done, looks cool for sure and the back line is also just fine along w/ the placement of the shoulder blades. Some ppl put them too high or too low, you did them just right. ^^ I like her wings too.. coolies for sure. I think her legs need to be a little longer and thinner for the porportion of her torso area though and she's missing her elbow. The blade/si/ er.. whatever it is, is cool too, very detailed. ^^ anywasy, this is cool, and the coloring and shading is good too. I'll go look at the rest of your gallery now. =D

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