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Carly Wietzman

Harry Potter RPG: Anyah Ramri
Harry Potter RPG: Anyah Ramri by @DarkRaptor (Carly Wietzman)

Well, this is my charecter in a rpg that takes place during harry's fifth year. She is a first year, named Anyah Ramri and this is her history.

Anyah never met her father, who dissapeared before her birth. Anyah was bitten by a werewolf when she was nine, and at that same age her mother died(i wont explain how so not to ruin my rping with the others at the board). She had been an orphan ever since and working at odd jobs at diagon valley. She recieved her hogwarts letter like everyone else. Well, its brief, but i dont want to ruin any fun! About her clothes. She is wearing a blue shirt under her borwn, shabby, secondhand robes. Also patched jeans(look at the bottom, they are a totally different color). One hand is in her pocket, the other clutching her wand. Her natural hair color is dark blond, which turns darker as the moon fills. She looks older than 11, but i guess that being a werewolf can do that to you. I'm not sure what to put in the background. Maybe her wolf form, or the forest, or the castle. Suggestions, coments, and especially critiques are welcomed.

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Posted: Monday, 05 November, 2001 @ 03:33 PM

First your drawing is very fresh from what I could see of it the definition is not very high, it needs tweeking a bit. Now the bad news J. K. Rowling does not just own Hrry Potter but also anything else to do with him, for example Diagon Alley the school, names of teachers, Quiditch in fact everything in her books. You are treading on thin ice with this, she could not object to your character just that it is set in the suroundings out of her books. Be very careful.

Posted: Monday, 05 November, 2001 @ 08:27 PM

Aww, in reply to the person above. I shant make this mistake again and i changed the credits from Harry Potter is Jk Rowlings to Harry Potter, Hogwarts, and everything associated with the book..... -Carly

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