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Cristina Marsi

Stolla alm
Stolla alm by @malvasia (Cristina Marsi)

Hmm. whats wrong with this one? Im not happy with it but cant say why :(

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Posted: Tuesday, 07 September, 2004 @ 10:43 AM

Is it the path (?) behind the house? What jumps out to me in this picture is that the cabin is so well defined while the trees are sketchy and you can see some of the canvas through them. Each part is painted nicely by itself, but put together they conflict a bit. Still, it's a lovely painting. I love the shapes of the shrubs in the bottom center of the picture and the house is rendered wonderfully. Nice work.

Posted: Tuesday, 07 September, 2004 @ 11:38 AM

Oh, no, that light brown thingie behind the house is not a path, the perspective would be completely wrong. It is supposed to be a ravine, unfortunately its not that clear :( Thanks for commenting, now i realize i put too many details on that house. Another thing that bothers me is the total lack of white areas, which in watercolour are very important... Hmmm, still need to practice a lot :)

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