Wow..this is hardly zimish at all. Mabye the irken is a bit, but as i said your style looks almost nothing like jhonen's if your trying. The eyes,the nose, the hair everything except the ears is barely zim style and the neck is too thick zim people either have skinny necks(unless they fat) or no neck at all cuz it slants twords the shirt. sure your art is nice, but it hardly has the zim touch if you try to make it that way. Your irkens are still..a bit zimish though. And the kissing thing..Well ive discussed that. Over and out this is Me..a person

You know who he looks like? Tetsuo from Akira! Well, that's what I thnk anyway. Truly excellent, I would LOVE to see this in color.