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Kristen Sharpe

The Lighthouse
The Lighthouse by @kristensk (Kristen Sharpe)

A lighthouse I drew for perspective practice in my Comic Book Illustration class. There are parts of it I really like and parts of it that need some manner of adjustment I can't quite put my finger on... but it was worth posting.(pencil drawing)

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Posted: Sunday, 30 September, 2001 @ 08:59 AM

Hey cool!I really like the rocks.

Posted: Tuesday, 23 October, 2001 @ 11:21 PM

You know, I think this turned out really nice. Great sense of mood, nice perspective (even if the tower is a bit flat)...and your tones go from very light to very dark (in a lot of your other pics, I've noticed, you stay in the middle-grey value. Stop that! Define your darkest dark, make it BLACK as night, find your lightest point, make it whit,e then work around that, I guess!)

:) Thanks for your comment at my gallery, btw.

my art: www.side7.com/art/daniwill

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