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Cassandra Randall

The Trio
The Trio by @CassLupin (Cassandra Randall)

This is probably the first picture I've done of the trio where all three came out decently. Honestly I'd get Harry and Ron done and Hermione would just never appear. And this also happens to be the first time where I like Hermione's design. In the past her hairs never been right.

I had to use the computer to make it visible since I always draw so lightly. And unfortunately that make the spot under Harry's nose get darker. It's not really noticable. Damn erasers.....

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Posted: Sunday, 08 August, 2004 @ 07:30 PM

You do faces very well, but the bodies lack definition. Maybe try drawing the body and then adding clothes to make it look more pronounced or exaggerate the features a bit. Also, the hands look very small. The faces and hair look really great, though. Just work on proportions and stuff a bit.^_^ And don't worry about Harry's nose thing, I didn't even notice until I read the description.

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