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Christania II Umishima
Christania II Umishima by @Umeko (Umeko Yamitaro)

This is the one of a coupls of cubs not being a twin to anyone

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Posted: Tuesday, 12 May, 2009 @ 09:37 PM
Rating: 3

I love the slat blue coloration of her stripes and the markings around her eyes. I also like the simplicity of her having an all white tail and white wings. The outfit design came out fun.

The one thing that I think I would have done with her outfit is not have the front portion clinging to her lower legs, that it should be more draped just as the back part half does. Since the outfit looks almost like it is glued to her legs, unless it is actually made to cling like that.

Lovely job on her hair and her facial expression. I like the contrasting bright blue tips of her ears against the deeper coloration of her stripes. Nice work sis.

Posted: Thursday, 14 May, 2009 @ 02:06 AM

[quote="Kellendraysia"]I love the slat blue coloration of her stripes and the markings around her eyes. I also like the simplicity of her having an all white tail and white wings. The outfit design came out fun.

The one thing that I think I would have done with her outfit is not have the front portion clinging to her lower legs, that it should be more draped just as the back part half does. Since the outfit looks almost like it is glued to her legs, unless it is actually made to cling like that.

Lovely job on her hair and her facial expression. I like the contrasting bright blue tips of her ears against the deeper coloration of her stripes. Nice work sis.[/quote]

Thank you big sis ^^

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