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Ryan Culver

Star Warz
Star Warz by @tisbore (Ryan Culver)

this is an older pic. o.o.. with obi one and darth maul? .. did i spell that right?

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Posted: Wednesday, 01 October, 2003 @ 02:03 PM

That's pretty good ^-^ I really only have two suggestions for this. One, Looks a little like Darth Maul is glaring at us rather than Obi-Wan (yep, that's how it's spelled, don't get too embarrassed, I have trouble with names too ^^;;) Unless that's what you intended, I suggest maybe him tilting his head a bit towards Obi-Wan, or focusing his pupils in his direction. And secondly, I think it'd suit the picture better if he held one lightsabre blade pointing inward in front of him instead of outward.

Well, I think I've done enough damage here ^.^;; Nice job, nontheless =)

Posted: Wednesday, 01 October, 2003 @ 02:28 PM

well really, I drew some sandstorm trooper. but i had a pic of darth maul and so added him, I guess hes supposed to be running through like a hall. Obi-Wan is like waiting around a corner. anyways. thanks for the comment. and the name correction.. =P

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