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For Trinity
For Trinity by @mollmadi (Molly Madison)

My first attempt at drawing a male ^_^; This is supposed to be a drawing of Trinity-san's character, but I don't think I got it quite right. He's supposed to be a lot younger, and a lot leaner, as well. I was probably concentrating too much on making sure he looked male. ^-^;

I'll definitely be trying this one again. I think I know exactly how to make him look younger...

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Posted: Thursday, 17 January, 2002 @ 10:37 PM
Younger: make the face more round, less "long." Shorten the nose some (maybe), and maybe widen his eyes a tad.
He looks about right, though (20ish, mebbe a li'l older). He definitely reads as a male.

I LOVELOVELOVE this style! So sketchylivelygood!

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