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Monica Huffaker

Unexpected Visiter
Unexpected Visiter by @Kuroneko_Tama (Monica Huffaker)

Page one of a Plot turned Manga I plan to work on.

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Fan Art - Anime/Manga
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Class:
Work-In-Progress
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Posted: Monday, 20 December, 2004 @ 07:43 PM
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ejeh!! good story but you must take the ink pen and add some shines...with pencils shades get well...

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