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A Girtz

Oni, Yer much too fast!
Oni, Yer much too fast! by @ajfox (A Girtz)

Finished product! Collaboration between Zack and myself fer Oni on her Birthday! Zack does good coloring, yes? Image © AJ and Zack. Pencils by me, Image post-production by Dave Lurie. Oni belongs to Stephanie Kao.

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23y26d ago
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Posted: Sunday, 23 December, 2001 @ 03:28 PM

hey, nice work! if i had to pick on something...it would be the legs/feet, but i wouldnt have much of an argument!

Posted: Monday, 10 June, 2002 @ 03:30 PM

Cool pic and congrats on being artist of the day. ^^ There is a prob- the feet look too small to possibly support that body. But other than that, It's GREAT!

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