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Ayame Suzuki

Adolf (sketch)
Adolf (sketch) by @minako134 (Ayame Suzuki)

Adolf is an original character from my story, "Crash = Catch". I couldn't think of a good name for him, so Derek named him. I love the name, it's great. Naming things has been a big thing this last month or so. ^_^ I like his hair, but I need to make it look less like Tracey/Kenji of Pokemon. And I need to work on anatomy. And clothes. And everything.

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21y198d ago
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Posted: Friday, 20 December, 2002 @ 01:04 AM

Well I, for one, like the clothing. Simplicity makes the world go 'round. He doesn't have much to show off though, does he? Heh, I expected a bit more muscle when I picked the name out of thin air, Adolf just seems like... such a muscle head sort of name. :)

He he he, I guess he has room to grow, lift some weights.

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