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Long Day
Long Day by @silverwolf (Ag Wolf)

It's the Elf Girl again. She lieing down on her bed after a long day, but everybody doesn't think she is lieing on a bed. 0_o Oh well. Hope you like!

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20y128d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 18 August, 2004 @ 11:24 PM

Great picture! The proportions of the body and even the hands are done very well.^^ If you want artistic help then I would suggest working on the face. The neck is very thick compared to the rest of body, and the face looks huge in comparison. It looks like you were drawing two different pictures and you pasted them together. Both look good separately, but the proportions are off when put together. Also, the nose seems like it should be more in the center. And maybe make the mouth a tiny bit bigger? I don't know...just some suggestions.^^ Good job!

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