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Child of Kane
Child of Kane by @cid (Shail Hawkins)

Gemini, Child of Kane, bearer of the Tiki of Kane, the Water Artifact.

..... I had a LOT of trouble with this one, because I couldn't figure out how to do dramatic water-magic effects in the cramped space. Then I decided I didn't have to do anything dramatic, because she's a healer. So I did this. But her hair is so lopsided and her body so mis-proportioned that it throws the whole thing off for me. Maybe I'll rework this one after I do the last three.

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Posted: Thursday, 04 September, 2003 @ 10:42 PM
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Kool : ) i like how it look right now, actually... sometimes is easier for the artist to see imperfections than the viewer :) its lovely.
Posted: Thursday, 04 September, 2003 @ 10:51 PM
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Wow! I love the stained-glass feel I get from looking at this image! The shading and lighting are very well done, and I love the line thickness. The proportion really is not that bad (I never noticed, actually, until you mentioned it) and the hair doesn't look that bad. All in all, this is a really good piece :)

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Posted: Friday, 05 September, 2003 @ 12:10 AM
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No, no, I like it. I like the finger-water interaction, it feels Special, somehow. And so serene, this is.

Posted: Friday, 05 September, 2003 @ 01:14 AM
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nice job there, JIll ^_^ the waterfall is a good touch: water, both pounding down and calm at rest.

I guess you're not so happy with it, but it looks fine to me...

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