Well that was an accident, I forgot to add a title so it didn't SAY "Un-Nude version" ... But yes I do have a nude(topless) version of the same exact picture.
This was an oekaki I was just doodling and playing around with... I drew her topless first, and then I saved it and finished it off with a shirt added on.
She DOES look simply adorable! I really just wanna hug her. I love her cute little fanged grin.
I am really impressed with how well you've drawn her anatomy. Everwhere--not just her breasts, but her neck and face. I really like how you've done her fur as well!
As for suggestions, I'd suggest adding more shadows, esp in her hair, but don't be afraid to use more in the smaller areas, like her eyes. Also, highlights on her fur itself wouldn't be too amiss. Depending on the program you're using, though, your options might be a little limited.
I always recommend backgrounds, too, to make your character really stand out.
Now, you say this is the 'un-nude' version, does that mean you have a nude one in your gallery too?