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Mikhail Dunkelheit

The Twisted Lines of God
The Twisted Lines of God by @Astaroth (Mikhail Dunkelheit)

Ahh..... life is short...... Destiny is tenebrous and the end......the end....the end....

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Posted: Thursday, 20 January, 2005 @ 06:24 PM

ya lo terminaste?! te quedo regio!! guau! a la proxima, ponle las pupilas a Mikhail...o es que en que estado esta Mikhail...acaso es Astaroth?

Posted: Friday, 21 January, 2005 @ 07:31 PM

Bueeno.....este dibujo tomó otro tipo de trabajito...... sobre todo por la falta de tiempo...... por el traje es Kinnich Ahau..... Astaroth utiliza traje negro y la mano izquierda siempre está untada de sangre

Posted: Thursday, 20 January, 2005 @ 07:09 PM

This is really good!^^ It love the detail! I really like the girls face and the guys hair. Overall you did an awesome job!! :)

Posted: Friday, 21 January, 2005 @ 07:37 PM

Thank you............. tihs pic need much work......paint the details sometimes it can to bore.......I LIKE DRAW!!!!

Posted: Thursday, 20 January, 2005 @ 08:46 PM

Very nice ^^ The characters look really well drawn, just one thing, since the male character is hanging upside down, his hair should do the same, as not to make it seem like it is glued to his face. The costumes are very well detailed, and the anatomy is pretty good, perhaps the girl's neck could be a bit shorter, it looks too long. Overall, great job! Keep on drawin!

Posted: Friday, 21 January, 2005 @ 07:43 PM

Ahhh.......thank you for you comment......make drawings with this style is too complicated...... the materials are too hard to work.....even so.......it was well

Posted: Friday, 21 January, 2005 @ 12:22 AM

One thing I would improve on is the size of her head. Compared to his head and the width of her shoulders, her head looks a bit small. It can easily be fixed in Photoshop or some other editing applications.

The other thing I would do is to put something in the upper right hand corner to balance out the patch of green in the lower left hand corner. Perhaps something of a contrasting color such as pink or red.

Other than that, your choice of colors is nice. Stylized and not too complicated.

Posted: Friday, 21 January, 2005 @ 07:52 PM

I had limitations with this pic.....the materials they can bore, mainly in order to use them.......i not use Photoshop an other computer program for editing my pics, i like make draws to the old one.

Thank You (excuse me for my bad english)

Posted: Saturday, 29 January, 2005 @ 09:25 AM

HEY!!! MÁS DIBUS!!!! ME gusta mucho este también!!!!! Me encanta la forma en la que haces las sombras de los cristales de los trajes de ella..... Además los trajes en sí son muy bonitos!!!!!!! Podrías hacerte diseñador!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Por otro lado creo que el cuerpo de ella está un poco desproporcionado con respecto a su cabeza.... A parte de eso.... me sigue pareciendo un dibujo fantástico!!!!!!!!! Saludos de nuevo desde las Islas Canarias!

Posted: Sunday, 30 January, 2005 @ 08:10 PM

aqui sigo comentando.... el diseño del traje de ella puede ser un poquito complicado (el traje posee muchisimos detalles), lo de la desproporción se nota (ahi la embarré), y se acentúa con el ancho del traje, voy a corregir estos detalles

Posted: Monday, 31 January, 2005 @ 06:20 PM

wow, that is really, really good! and i like your caption. ^__^

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