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Charli Hyrax

A Better Blue
A Better Blue by @dassie (Charli Hyrax)

AF drawn without the powers of construction lines, woo. I cut her hands out because they looked bad. I want those jeans. I have that top.

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20y311d ago
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Posted: Monday, 25 August, 2003 @ 09:56 AM

Wicked! Should have kept the hands, even if you didn't like them much! Jodie -x-

Posted: Monday, 25 August, 2003 @ 10:48 AM

Maybe, but they really didn't look good -.- now it looks like she's playing a piano, and there's a patch of space where everything is invisible or something. LOL! >=D

Posted: Monday, 25 August, 2003 @ 10:52 AM

Lol, yeh that would work! (hi!) thanks for the comment on my pic, i ended up colouring the whole thing in black and white, with a fine line pen. Keep forgetting to uplaod it tho! I think It worked, and I added bits to the original pencil drawing too! :D Jodie -x-

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