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Ana Nyte

Neko
Neko by @Cyanide (Ana Nyte)

Another character from my RP, don't know why, but I always end up designing the dresses, fun! I think I should be a costume designer, all the ideas...:)

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20y59d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 22 April, 2004 @ 06:43 AM

OK, the dress design is great, and I think that is the main thing since that was what you were probably going for. But here are some things I noticed wrong. #1. the face is lopsided, but that is obvious and you probably know that by now #2. Her shoulders are too wide for those hips, she's not very proportionate. Either that, or you make them look too wide with that dess. #3. The tiara is barely visible and really smudged, you should outline that. Other then that, it's a great picture.

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