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Tamara Jaynes

Shooting Stars...
Shooting Stars... by @Eternity (Tamara Jaynes)

"Oh look, there's a star, it's all bright and happy, I wish I had a gun so I could shoot it down." -Meghan Rachelle

It was night, Meg and I were both pessimistic, and we were like, the stars are too shiny they need to go. LoL So, this is my character Ivy, and her character Shari sitting out by a campfire shooting stars down. The stars with the holes are the one's that are falling.

On a technical note, I'm very pleased with their faces, I usually can't draw profiles. And I did two of them, so booyaka! Another thing I do like about this is Ivy, her back, I don't believe it turned out nicely, as well as her butt, usually can't do that. I think her legs are a little out of proportion but I can't please myself always. And the feet are bad, ick, don't even look at them.... HEY I TOLD YOU NOT TO LOOK! Anyhow the rifles aren't bad either, and yes I know the campfire sucks... I'll try and make it better when I color this thing.

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Posted: Monday, 22 September, 2003 @ 10:31 PM

oooooooooooooohhhhhhhh, radness!!!!!!!! yeah, ivy's lower body does look a bit skewed, but the profiles are great! you did an excellent job with shari. come to union so we can have more art inspiring good times next year!

Posted: Tuesday, 23 September, 2003 @ 07:41 PM

I am going to come to Union and we will make more fun things like this... maybe actually try it someday ^__^

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