I love the shading in this picture. It's very dynamic and really jumps off the screen at you. The hair and shirts particularly are very nicely shaded, showing the shapes of each very well with them. The background is rendered quite nicely as well. You give a good sense of depth and subtle glory in it. Also, the table has a nice texture to it. It might help to smooth out your outlines a little, especially between different areas such as the girl's shirt and neck/head. Additionally, the little black areas you have stand out probably a little too much for what you're going for. But it's lovely work otherwise. I like the mix of muted colors and bold shading, it gives the picture a nice feeling. Good work.
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I love the shading in this picture. It's very dynamic and really jumps off the screen at you. The hair and shirts particularly are very nicely shaded, showing the shapes of each very well with them. The background is rendered quite nicely as well. You give a good sense of depth and subtle glory in it. Also, the table has a nice texture to it. It might help to smooth out your outlines a little, especially between different areas such as the girl's shirt and neck/head. Additionally, the little black areas you have stand out probably a little too much for what you're going for. But it's lovely work otherwise. I like the mix of muted colors and bold shading, it gives the picture a nice feeling. Good work.