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Fallen Angel

But A Dream
But A Dream by @Hack_Beta (Fallen Angel)

Wrote the poem yesterday. I like it. Still a bit depressed cuz my mom's being a jerk. Artwork © Copyright 2002 Fallen Angel

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Posted: Friday, 03 January, 2003 @ 04:34 AM

sniff This is so good, it's making me depressed. ^.^;; The picture itself speaks so much, you almost don't need the poem. (Not that I'm insulting the poem, we like the poem!) Great job, this is really neat.

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