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shane grass

the things inside my head
the things inside my head by @callmedoc (shane grass)

There are monster crawling around inside my head Whispering to me their pleas to have me dead I can't shut them out but all I want is my mind but they deny me this peace because they know no kind So some days I hold a knife real close to my skull To remind myself someday I will just carve that big hole And I can hear them laugh inside my ears Because they know deep down inside they hold all my fears

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