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The Need To Feed
The Need To Feed by @callmedoc (shane grass)

There are voices speaking all at once within my head

Telling me every second that I shouldn't be dead

I warn them but these words they do not heed

Every word of kindness I pursue to selfishly feed

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Fantasy
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Posted: Wednesday, 10 November, 2010 @ 03:49 AM
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Oh wow, I'm digging your style here, as well as the flat colors. VERY cool!

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