@EmoVampiress
Rhayvenn Compton

Blinded
Blinded by @EmoVampiress (Rhayvenn Compton)

This i was thinking that im blinded by what's going on around me. No one was letting me know anything, i was blinded... I used only a #2 Pencil

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Rough / Concept
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20y95d ago
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Posted: Sunday, 08 August, 2004 @ 03:30 AM

I like the way you made the body trail off.^^ The nose looks off because the top of it starts near her left eye and then it just turns to the right. If you moved it over towards the right eye a bit or it went the other way it would look much better. Great pic, though, it seems like you had a lot of personal feeling put into it.^^

Posted: Monday, 09 August, 2004 @ 04:45 PM

Thank you, i did realize that after i put it up there. I'll make sure i'll fix that problem in future drawings. Thanx again! :D

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