@morna
Jessica Evans

Shooting Star
Shooting Star by @morna (Jessica Evans)

Twilight fades away in time To reveal a beauty so divine Emerging from the tangeld twine Ethereal, spiritual, and benign

still not done with this, need to do ome touch ups on the tail and legs, and on some of the body

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Posted: Tuesday, 11 January, 2005 @ 07:06 AM

Hi Jessica Nice picture as always your work is excellent.....Shirley

Posted: Wednesday, 12 January, 2005 @ 12:23 AM
thanks shirley : )
Posted: Wednesday, 12 January, 2005 @ 02:50 AM

oo.......... great pic....... it looks very ethereal, very mysterious..... and the unicorn fits in perfectly....... luv it!

Posted: Friday, 21 January, 2005 @ 03:24 PM

I like the smooth effect on this here unicorn, i like the way the horn seems to be glowing.

Posted: Wednesday, 02 February, 2005 @ 08:11 AM

Well done! The misty effect in this piece is very pronounced, adding to the surreal quality. The foliage is magnificent, the grass looks like you could reach out and touch it. The face, horn, mane, neck, and chest are incredible, don't touch them.

I do have a few suggestions though. You've lost the sharp contrast in the tail and much of the body. Darker values in some areas will make the figure pop and appear just that much more realistic. A stray strand of hair or two in the top of the tail would also do wonders. The back hooves are great, but the visible front one has a dark line in it. I suggest that you cast more defining shadow and remove the line in order to make it look real.

Amazing job, overall. You are quite obviously talented with digital media, keep up the amzing work.

Posted: Wednesday, 02 February, 2005 @ 02:42 PM
Thanks for the comment : ) upon looking, I see what you mean, I also just realized I uploaded the wrong picture! I'll post the other more refined version of it :) Thanks again!

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