Ooh, this is a good one. Nice and angsty, but not without a certain degree of cuteness. sniff Sevvy looks so sad. And don't worry about the lines! They suit the picture much better than say, nice, smooth lines would.
Yesterday - Angsty Severus Snape by @NightmareNikki (Nikki Star)
This is a pretty neat oekaki pic for this sad song fic I wrote about Snape. It goes to the Beatles' "Yesterday" and people who have read it seem to like it okay. You can find it here. Anyway, I like this picture, but the only thing I can't stand is how squiggly the lines are >< But, other than that, I like it, good. That shadowy thingy with glowing eyes is Voldemort, so ya know (It goes with the line "there's a shadow hanging over me"..ya know, to represent V :P). Yup..Whatchya think?
it's cute and sad. I always thought that song fit him so well too (I love The Beatles!) and the squiggly lines actually add something to it (I don't know the proper English word) great piccy. And you got his expresson right too, looks so sad...
http://www.side7.com/cgi-bin/S7SDB/Archive.pl?ANO=7113