Loser the Umbreon by @caroturn (Carolyn Turner)
This is my eevee character. She belonged to a little boy who later joined team rocket. She became a science experiment and evolved into a white umbreon. Her lab number was 78923. When team rocket aimed to catch a newly hatched Ho oh they used her to battle the mother and when 'death star' lost she was renamed loser then abandoned. As hard as she tries to convince herself otherwise she knows she'll never see her trainer again.
Artwork © Copyright 2002 Carolyn Turner
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Wow. You should be writing fanfictions. I tried a few times but I never had a knack for it, all my ideas where to overused.
I love you picture alot, a white umbreon. I never thought of it but yeah, that's great. I love the way you drew the paws especially the left front paw. I also think the way you smeared the text is very creative.
My only critique is maybe you should try going over the line in pen realy slowly and carefully and erasing the pencil that scattered pencil. Just a suggestion. ^_^