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Pan playing the flute
Pan playing the flute by @veralucia (Vera Lucia Emerim)

A very young and well-behaved Pan plays the flute to a sleeping nynph.

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Teen (N)
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Finished Work
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22y285d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 21 February, 2002 @ 03:04 PM

There is so much in this picture that is fantastic art that I actually feel guilty pointing out faults so I'm saying sorry now! Firstly the follage on the trees they are all roundand on stalks a bit like lollies. Secondly the nymphs breasts are misshapen. There should of been a bit more shadow above her chest to show the curve towards her neck. Now as to your painting style, yes! you have a style and a very beautiful style something like the impressionist style of Van Gogh and the colours are well chosen it gives it a lovely Autumn like glow.

Posted: Thursday, 21 February, 2002 @ 04:45 PM

Thank you for your advice. I will try to correct the flaws you cited and some other I have already noticed. Please see more of my work and don,t be shy. Put all comments you wish. I will be grateful.

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