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Masq
Masq by @manda (Mandy Beach)

This is Madeline from my comic-in-progress Allegory.

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20y263d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 03 September, 2003 @ 10:50 AM

Oh wow, definetly loving this. The composition is awesome, ESPECIALLY for a cover. I am really impressed. This looks like it would be a great story to read, what with the mystery of all the masks and all. I'm very impressed. I really love her pose, it's very sexy but mysterious. Critique? Well, let me say first, I am so impressed with the hands. Wow. But, the arms seem too skinny, especially at the elbow on her left. I think it should stick out a bit more. Her legs also look a bit skinny, but unlike the elbow, I think the knee looks a bit big. However, these are nothing major and I know with practice you can fix 'em all. (I hope my advice helps!) So don't give up, keep drawing awesome pics. I think the ability to make a good composition is a lot more important than anatomical details!

Posted: Thursday, 02 October, 2003 @ 01:38 PM

Thank you for the advice, its already starting to show in my newer artwork (that I will post shortly)

Once again thank you. Usually i just get a 'wow that looks fabulous' no contructive critism at all. So thank you for that. Will definately work on it in the future. Glad you like <3

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