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Byanca B.

Van
Van by @Bybi (Byanca B.)

One of Twilight's TLK characters as a gift pic to her 'cause she was feeling blue :( The grass took a heck of a long time, but it looks better than my usual one :) too moon, on the other hand, looks horrible x_X

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Posted: Tuesday, 06 May, 2003 @ 11:22 AM

The only thing wrong with the moon is that it's too dark. You've got it acting as the scene's light source, and casting a definate line of light on Van's rump, and yet the moon itself is darker than that highlight. If you can still edit the image, just make the moon brighter, and it'll be fine. ^_^

But even so, this is a wonderful image. You have all the right to be proud of that grass-- it's AWESOME, and extremely well done. Kudos to you! ^_^

www.side7.com/art/caitwilt

Posted: Tuesday, 06 May, 2003 @ 06:25 PM

She has a really good point here. I like that the moon makes it look foggy. The whole feel of this scene is just really cool. Keep up the great art!

http://www.side7.com/art/liliwagn/gallery.html

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