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Sesshoumaru and Rin Moonlight (SHOOT)
Sesshoumaru and Rin Moonlight (SHOOT) by @Sondra (Sondra Blockman)

OMG, this picture started out so good and it just went down the friggin drain...poor sesshie and rin..:( Damn charcoal smeered, didn't blend right and just ruined the pic.. I've learned my lesson. I'll redeem myself somehow. goes back to the drawing board

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Posted: Wednesday, 04 February, 2004 @ 11:15 AM

Backgrounds are most definitely evil. Still tho', I don't think that this looks that bad. Sesshourmaru and Rin still look great, and there's little point to having a super cool background if the figures in the foreground suck. Regardless, don't get discouraged ^_^ No matter of how a pic turns out, you'll always learn something.

Posted: Wednesday, 04 February, 2004 @ 02:47 PM

yea I definetly did learn a thing or two. I really want photoshop or something so i could go back and fix my mistakes. Thanks for your time :)

Posted: Monday, 23 February, 2004 @ 02:41 AM

You say you don't like this picture? Why ever not? I think it is beautiful I love the colors and the fact that you did it in charcoal is even more impressive. claps Excellent job! I love the expression on Sesshoumaru's face. It seems so distant and almost sad. Great job! :)

Posted: Tuesday, 24 February, 2004 @ 10:48 AM

Very nice, i like ur art, and i luv inuyasha, especially sessy and inuyasha ^^ they cute, and this is a very cute picture, nice job*smiles and claps*

Posted: Tuesday, 24 February, 2004 @ 07:38 PM

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS PIC!!!! Especially Sessy's face it's so perfect, very professional. I couldn't do better if I tried and trust me I have. The shading is also wonderful, especially in his hair. I would sell my soul to the devil to draw like you, unfortunatly for me I haven't seen any devils around lately* pouts*. Anyways I love the composition of this picture, and the way you drew sesshomaru would even make the mangaka* jealous! The only real problem I see is the mistake you made with the charcoal...oh and I hate to do this because I'm such a fan of your work( don't hate me I'm just trying to be a good critic) but Rin's position looks alittle impossible...I don't think many people's waist are that flexible. Anyway this is a superb pic...and I look forward to seeing more!!!

Btw sorry about the endless blabbering...

Mangaka = manga artists

Posted: Wednesday, 25 February, 2004 @ 01:36 AM

lol, THANK YOU VERY MUCH! but just stop lying to yourself...we all know who the superior artist here is...cough yea...lol, but anyway, i never noticed it until NOW that rin is stretching around really far....she must be pretty darn flexible. Thanks for pointing that out ;)

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