Catherine Fitzsimmons

Keepin' It Real
Keepin' It Real by Catherine Fitzsimmons (@Jinx)

Sometimes, when life laughs at you, you can't help but laugh along with it.

Finished Work
18 years and 65 days ago
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Posted: Monday, 27 September, 2004 @ 01:39 AM

Really great detail, I really like actually quite a bit about this. all your' proportions are flawless, and the detail and shading in the clothes, and accessories is amazing. The hair is also very nicely rendered. The rain, and the water running off their faces' is done quite well, and i really like how you darkened the wet areas on the clothes. The clouds are done well, as is the rain. The only thing that kinda irks me.... (if that's a word?) is the mouth on the guy on the right. don't get me wrong, there is nothing wrong with how it's drawn, it's just that i don't really think that it works with his face, and the picture. For some reason the mouth just draws my attention right there, and kind of making lose sight of the rest of the picture. anyway, this is really really good, great job. XD

Sincerely, Ikaika

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