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Ana Nyte

Naida
Naida by @Cyanide (Ana Nyte)

This is yet another character from my RPG. His name is Naida (it's a female arabic name that means 'water sprite') He's an elf that I play, and yes there's a reason why he looks so feminine, this little cutie is gay XD. Don't ask me why, but I really like him. This is a very quick sketch of him that I did in English class with a mechanical red pencil that I stole from my friend, thanks Silver!, lol. Yeah, please comment gets down on her knees and begs I really like comments, pleeeeaseee!!!!! lol. If people don't comment, I don't know if anyone even looks at my work and if I don't get feedback, I don't know if I should even continue posting on here, so plese people, tell me what you think! :D Artwork ¿ 2004 Ana Nyte

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Posted: Friday, 09 April, 2004 @ 01:49 AM

Out of the three monochromatic sketches in your gallery, i think that this one is the best yet. The hair is done really well, I like how it;s brushed back on one side revealing his forhead, and the little dots in it add just the needed amount of detail. I like how you did his expression and face, with just enough femininity to make him look like an elf and not like a girl. And I like his eyes, well, eyes, lol, but do elves actually have slitted eyes? Oh well, you are the artist, the details are up to you! And I still can't get over how real you made the mouth look, if I had to pick a favourite part of the sketch, strangely enough it would be the mouth, I just love the shading on the lips! Great job! THe uniform though needs some work, well, a lot of work actually, you focused more on the face and you kind of rushed through the rest of it, but oh well, it's still nice!

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