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Catherine Fitzsimmons

by @Jinx (Catherine Fitzsimmons)

Erin and her Joe, more or less based on various reference images.

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Humanoid
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Posted: Sunday, 17 August, 2008 @ 10:00 PM
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Beautiful scene, I love the joe's expression, Erin look nice too, I had been worked a bit more at the wrinkles of erin's garment (the details never exceed for me XXD) but the composition and the general design of clothes is good, well done

Posted: Sunday, 17 August, 2008 @ 10:20 PM
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Thanks for the comment. I do still have to work on adding clothes folds even to garments that shouldn't seem to have them.

Posted: Monday, 18 August, 2008 @ 12:52 PM
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I absolutely love the way their hair was done!

The highlights look beautiful...

I just think Erin's face looks a bit... stretched? That's a bad word for it, but that's all I caught that I thought might need some work.

I also just realized I love the Joe's pants. o.o

Posted: Tuesday, 19 August, 2008 @ 09:26 PM
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Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you like the hair, it's something I've been trying to work on lately. I know a problem with Erin's face here is that she has no ear, I wonder if that might be throwing off the perspective. I love those pants, too. I got the design from a picture Erin drew and I really like the belt/strap things.

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