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Lainey Burton

Sword bot
Sword bot by @lainburt (Lainey Burton)

just a quick sketch in Open canvas of a robot thingy i had drawn in one of my notebooks.

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Posted: Monday, 24 November, 2003 @ 05:00 PM

Congrats to you! I never thought the painterly brushes in OC could work so well for metal, but WOW! You've done a great job here, especially on the Cold Unfeeling Robot Arms. YAAAAAAAAAY!

Posted: Thursday, 27 November, 2003 @ 09:41 PM

Oh, I love this! The four red eye thingies are kind of disturbing in a way... They give the machine an almost sentient look. I like how you've focused the image on the machine, drawing it clear and sharp, while giving the background an insubstantial feeling. When I look at it, I can almost feel motion! Nice detail, too, on the various robotic appendages. One thing, the two upper eyes seem a bit incongruous, but that could be intentional. I actually kind of like the lopsided, slapstick effect it gives the robot. It goes along with its mismatched arms as well. Great job!

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