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Poetry 1
Poetry 1 by @Mali (Malia)

This poem is about a wandering soul whom is repenting for her suicide. I like it lots. Very meaningful. u.u

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Posted: Wednesday, 03 December, 2003 @ 12:16 AM
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o.o Spooky creepy.. yes I likes it! You have very good poems. It is so hard to see the consequences of one's actions until you see 'em in hindsight.. then it's like.. how could I have been so stoooopiiid.. missed out on so much..

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