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not like the others
not like the others by @Ryath (Ryath Lonewolf)

Well I took the pic I drew for Wag thin and deside to change it.

I got feed up of always seeing fur/were art being thin little thin so i deside to show that even big can be buterful.

I really like how this ended up^_^ and thin I proven mine point,what you think?

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Posted: Thursday, 02 October, 2003 @ 06:45 AM

I agree with that statement, I think you have proven your point very well, big is perdy!!!

Posted: Tuesday, 18 November, 2003 @ 10:07 AM

Thank you for recognizing not everyone is thin! :D The waist/hip area is a bit confusing as it looks like her waist goes out at one point then in quite sharply... am I making sense? Also her hips should probably be a bit wider. A girls hips are at least as wide as her shoulders. The face should probably show some roundness too. But overall this is well done. Weight is not an easy thing to draw (which is why if you take figure drawing they'll make sure not all your models are thin). It makes it easier if you have someone pose for you though, so you can see how weight is distributed. Also try take the pose yourself. Oh, and one lil composition thing- let's see some hands. :D

Posted: Monday, 24 November, 2003 @ 04:37 AM
np at all hun: ).Ya your makeing sense and i see what you mean will mybe work one that and I try some hand next time:P.

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