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Aleksa Valentine
Aleksa Valentine by @klawzie (Chella Reaves)

Happy Valentine's Day. :3

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Teen (S)
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18y268d ago
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Posted: Tuesday, 14 February, 2006 @ 10:32 PM

gyaaa! This is beautiful!!!! ONe of the best pieces for sure~~~

Great outline! Very smooth, lovely colouring! I love the coloure and lines on the face, it's teh best!

As for the area in the leg though, the thickness of the lines varied and it would've been better if it's clearned out The creases look great! and i love her expression!

Oh and the foot is VERY well drawn!! =D Another side note however, the hair, it would've been somewhat better if you could've added more details so the hair wouldn't look as clumped.. btu that's only a personal preference =p

GREAT JOB!! and happy valentines day! XD I want that shirt/jacket o.O (And BODY! XD)

Posted: Tuesday, 14 February, 2006 @ 10:58 PM

Maw, thanks! :D

Yeah, I sort of messed up a little on the legs. >_< I'm not sure if I'll use that paper anymore for inking. XD It's a little too rough for smooth lines.

And I agree with you about the hair... I want it to look clumped together, but more deffinition to it would make it look more like stripes of hair rather than these.. puffy things. XD hee hee. (It was 'due' today, though, so I didn't take the time I properly should have. >_> )

::laughs:: XD I'd take the body and outfit too. XD Or hair. Any of the three. XD Haha! Happy Valentine's Day to you too - and thanks for the critique! I appreciate it!

Posted: Wednesday, 15 February, 2006 @ 08:30 PM

Nice work. I think you did the pose very nicely. I think the lower leg in the front looks like it's really bent.

Posted: Wednesday, 15 February, 2006 @ 08:48 PM

Bent properly or bent improperly? :D

Thanks for the comment! :D

Posted: Friday, 28 April, 2006 @ 02:09 AM

This is one of my faves! I think the pose as well as the expression on this pic is why i like it so much. For one thing, poses like that are hard--I've tried! And she looks realistic. U have a great knack for making anatomy look right too--the feet, the hip bones, etc. And I really like her face here. Great job!

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