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Ellen Margot

Sango and Miroku Doujinshi
Sango and Miroku Doujinshi by @Elena (Ellen Margot)

A small doujinshi, which originally started out with the drawing on the left. But then I felt like drawing a couple of funny images next to it...

Anyway, Miroku's trying to cheer up Sango in the first image. Then he touches her behind, grinning ('ke ke ke'). Sango slaps Miroku and calls him an idiot and pervert, Miroku exclaiming 'a ta ta ta' ('ouch!').

I hope the Japanese is good, I'm not good in Japanese and cheated using a translator... I admit ;)

Drawn with pencils, inked, and colored with Photoshop.

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Posted: Tuesday, 01 February, 2005 @ 03:48 PM

Your mini-doujin is cute! However, reading it is pretty difficult, you've got some of your kana wrong. (You used the hiragana for 'na' instead of 'ta', for example.) The art is very cute though, and the shading is nicely done. Just make sure you run your kana by someone with some basic Japanese skills before you post and you'll be good to go. ^_^

Posted: Wednesday, 02 February, 2005 @ 04:48 AM

Thank you very much for the help!

I'm working on my Japanese skills, so I hope to get better soon enough ;D

Posted: Tuesday, 01 February, 2005 @ 07:06 PM

in this mini-doujinshi, confirm that Miroku is a real pervert!..good work with this...and you can get better the japanese dialogues!:)

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