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Ich weine, mein Liebster
Ich weine, mein Liebster by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

Text (GERMAN VERSION) Ich weine, mein Liebster, denn du bist gegangen

Meine Augen sind blind, mein Denken ist leer meine Lippen gefroren

Mir ist so kalt, mein Liebster Wo sind deine wärmenden Hände

ENGLISH VERSION

I'm weeping, my love As you've left My eyes won't see your light anymore My mind has been emptied of all thoughts The tone of my voice has died away I'm freezing, my love Where are your hands to keep me warm?

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