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Ekel
Ekel by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

Text (German version) Was von dir bleibt, ist Ekel Du liegst in deinem Sarg Ich kenne dich nicht mehr Komisch siehst du aus All die aufgeplatzten Stücke in deiner Haut Unziemlich dick bist du geworden Ein Luftballon Zum Platzen Du stinkst Ich halte mir die Nase zu Soll ich an dir lecken? Ein kleines Häufchen Dreck im Universum Wer soll daran denken?

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